#6 - Blizzards are white, cars accelerate, please write a poem that your teachers find great!2/28/2019 Write a poem about your book.
It needs to rhyme and be at least 10 lines long with at least 5 words per line. We are looking for creativity and relation to your book.
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Save me a Seat RJ, JS, BM
2/28/2019 06:59:11 am
Save Me Seat
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Grounded, Emma, Brynn, (Ellie)
3/1/2019 07:55:12 am
That was a very good story, it showed a lot of glory. :)
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eleven corcin alainea gage
3/1/2019 07:55:49 am
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save me a seat
3/4/2019 07:14:53 am
That's Amazing
Kailyn, Ellie, Katelyn
3/4/2019 07:16:22 am
Your rhymes were very good,
The blue M.A.N. Group- Ungifted
3/4/2019 07:17:01 am
This one was sad,
Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:22:55 am
I love your poem!!!! So, so much! Thank you! I almost (only almost) makes me want to forgive your lack of capital letters! I hope all groups read your poem.
Million Dollar Throw Andrew, Bryson, Addie
3/1/2019 07:58:02 am
Nice work guys! Like the"They moved to New Jersey in a hurry. Ravi likes curry."
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Katelyn, Ellie, Kailyn
3/4/2019 07:07:46 am
We liked the part where you said "Dillon likes to give Joe and Ravi a beat if you want to find out more read save me a seat". We noticed you didn't use capital letters or punctuation but over-all, it was great!
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Operation Holes
3/7/2019 07:52:35 am
Very EPIC!!!
gage corbin alainea
3/4/2019 07:17:54 am
that was bars yall are stars
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:19:12 am
I come up with nine lines based on your punctuation, but Mrs. McKichan thinks you actually had ten. (Make sure you thank her!) WHY?! WHY!?! didn't you capitalize the title of your book?!? You did a fun job of covering the content in your poem and working in some rhymes.
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Sean, Amelia, Daniel, and Isaiah
2/28/2019 06:59:36 am
Operation Holes
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Save me a Seat
3/1/2019 07:50:21 am
good poem
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Grounded, Emma, Brynn, (Ellie)
3/1/2019 07:56:38 am
Good rhymes! That is worth 500 dimes!
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Powerless, SB, TS, and CW
3/1/2019 07:58:31 am
nice;) great rhyming
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Powerless, SB, TS, and CW
3/4/2019 07:17:25 am
Kate Barlow's lipstick was her sign.
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The blue M.A.N. Group- Ungifted
3/4/2019 07:19:21 am
That lipstick part was great,
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Ellie, Kailyn, Katelyn
3/4/2019 07:21:48 am
It related well to your book,
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Save Me A Seat
3/4/2019 07:25:53 am
Nice Job 😂😂
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:28:21 am
So good! Sooooooooo good! Love!
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Riley Ben Mav MudShark
3/1/2019 07:41:00 am
Poem
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Save me a Seat
3/1/2019 07:47:10 am
Nice
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Grounded, Emma, Brynn, (Ellie)
3/1/2019 07:58:48 am
We were fond of how you can make that rhyme! We bet that took a lot of time!
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Ellie, Katelyn, Kailyn
3/4/2019 07:24:55 am
Your poem was really fantastic,
The blue M.A.N. Group- Ungifted
3/4/2019 07:22:12 am
Whats wrong with the principal,
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Million Dollar Throw Andrew, Bryson, Addie
3/4/2019 07:22:46 am
We like the rhyme
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:34:49 am
Good job! Are any of you named Bob?
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Save me a Seat (Resubmitted)
3/1/2019 07:45:51 am
Save Me Seat
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Riley Ben Mav
3/1/2019 07:52:16 am
Nice, you guys are good poets
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The blue M.A.N. Group- Ungifted
3/4/2019 07:25:36 am
We like that last line,
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Powerless, SB, TS, and CW
3/1/2019 07:49:37 am
Powerless
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Grounded, Emma, Brynn, (Ellie)
3/1/2019 08:00:14 am
That was very good! Great thing they weren't fire wood!
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The blue M.A.N. Group- Ungifted
3/4/2019 07:28:13 am
Great poem so true,
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:43:23 am
The poem is nicely done. Wish you'd write another one!
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Grounded Girls, Emma, Ellie, Brynn
3/1/2019 07:51:51 am
The first pages of the book, Dolly was grounded,
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:55:55 am
I love the effort! You went above and beyond and still held true to the requirements.
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Masters of disaster
3/1/2019 07:52:23 am
Masters of Disaster Poem
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Million Dollar Throw Andrew, Bryson, Addie
3/4/2019 07:10:05 am
We like the poem it's really funny!
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GROUNDED, EMMA, ELLIE, BRYNN
3/4/2019 07:15:54 am
That was amazing! All of the good reviews you will be raising.
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Powerless, SB, TS, and CW
3/4/2019 07:23:51 am
This poem will never be hated. This poem will only be escalated.
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:57:12 am
It's good; it's nice.
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Million Dollar Throw Andrew, Bryson, Addie
3/1/2019 07:55:32 am
The main character is Nate
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 07:59:59 am
Ya know, at first I thought, "Eh. It's okay." But then I reread it and realized you did a nice job covering the bases of the book. You found a way to work in the rhymes, too. So, actually, I'm quite impressed. Nice work!
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The blue M.A.N. group- Ungifted
3/1/2019 07:59:23 am
Donovan Curtis goes to school,
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GROUNDED, EMMA, ELLIE, BRYNN
3/4/2019 07:28:40 am
This was very, very good! To be as good as you? I don't think we could!
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:03:47 am
You did it
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Katelyn, Kailyn, Ellie
3/1/2019 08:01:22 am
Bethsaida
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Powerless, SB, TS, and CW
3/4/2019 07:09:31 am
great poem. #nice(noice)
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SAVE ME A SEAT JS, BM, RJ
3/4/2019 07:23:45 am
VERY COOL😃😂
Absolutely Almost ( AM, NE, KT)
3/4/2019 07:20:58 am
We really like this thing. It has a lot of bling.
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GROUNDED, EMMA, ELLIE, BRYNN
3/4/2019 07:25:26 am
We're giving you five stars! It was out of this world almost to mars!
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:07:10 am
Wow. This is phenomenal. It'll be next to impossible to beat!
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absolutely almost (KT NE AM)
3/4/2019 07:16:29 am
Albie does not like school
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GROUNDED, EMMA, ELLIE, BRYNN
3/4/2019 07:21:14 am
We loved that story! You guys should write some morey!
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:12:18 am
I appreciate how concise this is. It's actually a gift to be able to cover everything with only a few words.
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The Wednesday Wars Lydia, Micah, and Ben
3/4/2019 07:23:26 am
On Wednesdays Holling has to stay with Mrs. Baker
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The Wednesday Wars Lydia, Micah, and Ben
3/5/2019 06:30:22 am
We meant to say:
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Still Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:18:14 am
LOL! LOVE THIS!!!
Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:17:41 am
Your vocab really added to this. I liked it!
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Jaida, Ethan, and Lawson
3/5/2019 06:40:07 am
We can’t all be rattlesnakes
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:34:20 am
Grammar is still a thing in a poem... (hint, hint).
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Noah, Noah, Ava Payne
3/5/2019 06:44:17 am
Thirteen Ways to Sink a Sub
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Mrs. Smith
3/7/2019 08:55:40 am
It's done! It's done!
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